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Saturday, March 03, 2007
  This change me a lot(renzhi)
In our lives has a lot of things happened or will happen, some of things are good for you some of things are bad for you. Your life is happy or sad. Every people don’t like bad things but these things often happened, when bad things happened you can know a lot of thing or can next times never happen.
One thing changes me a lot. When I was studied in high school I often work hard at class but I often think I study hard and had a very good score at exams so I began not work very hard, at the important exam I have a low score and teacher and parents are very angry. So when this thing happened I remember you must work hard all time if you not work hard you will never win at any race
 
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Good specific example in your second paragraph. Remember to do this each time you write a paragraph. This is what your professors and teacher will look for.
 
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    AE1
    Saturday, March 03, 2007
      This change me a lot(renzhi)
    In our lives has a lot of things happened or will happen, some of things are good for you some of things are bad for you. Your life is happy or sad. Every people don’t like bad things but these things often happened, when bad things happened you can know a lot of thing or can next times never happen.
    One thing changes me a lot. When I was studied in high school I often work hard at class but I often think I study hard and had a very good score at exams so I began not work very hard, at the important exam I have a low score and teacher and parents are very angry. So when this thing happened I remember you must work hard all time if you not work hard you will never win at any race
     
    Comments:
    Good specific example in your second paragraph. Remember to do this each time you write a paragraph. This is what your professors and teacher will look for.
     
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