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Monday, June 18, 2007
  job:seungho
SEUNGHO
AE 1 CORE
ESSAY #2
MY OCCUPATON

I want to be a doctor because a doctor helps other people, has high social status and earns
a lot of money.
First, a doctor helps other people and can apply for a volunteer. I think that is very great work.
Most people can’t do that because it’s hard to study. For instance, doctor can treat people who
get injury. Also, when natural disasters occur, doctors can help injured.
Second, a doctor has high social status. That makes me satisfied about my job. Also, I have
confidence about my job. For example, when I meet anyone, I will be confident. Then, I can
concentrate my job and have self-praise.
Third, doctors earn a lot of money. If I’m a doctor, I will buy a beautiful house. I will live there
with my family. Then I will buy a good car because I like driving. Also, I will make my life-style
better. Most doctors earn more money than workers with other jobs.
Finally, I think being a doctor is very interesting because this job has many advantages.
Also, if I get this job, I will be satisfied.
  1:45 PM
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    AE1
    Monday, June 18, 2007
      job:seungho
    SEUNGHO
    AE 1 CORE
    ESSAY #2
    MY OCCUPATON

    I want to be a doctor because a doctor helps other people, has high social status and earns
    a lot of money.
    First, a doctor helps other people and can apply for a volunteer. I think that is very great work.
    Most people can’t do that because it’s hard to study. For instance, doctor can treat people who
    get injury. Also, when natural disasters occur, doctors can help injured.
    Second, a doctor has high social status. That makes me satisfied about my job. Also, I have
    confidence about my job. For example, when I meet anyone, I will be confident. Then, I can
    concentrate my job and have self-praise.
    Third, doctors earn a lot of money. If I’m a doctor, I will buy a beautiful house. I will live there
    with my family. Then I will buy a good car because I like driving. Also, I will make my life-style
    better. Most doctors earn more money than workers with other jobs.
    Finally, I think being a doctor is very interesting because this job has many advantages.
    Also, if I get this job, I will be satisfied.
      1:45 PM
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